look
up
always
as sunrays
and patches of blue sky
shine through a canopy of trees
forming a green arch over you
purifying the air
and the soul
never
look
back
Dear Friends, today, I'm sharing a Fibonacci poem. with a syllable count of 1,1,2,3,5,8,8,5,3,2,1,1. This was inspired by sitting outside in my back yard and looking up at the trees. I have quite a variety of tall trees--pine, spruce, oak--and fresh air!
I'm also sharing a window view of the trees from inside my new home. On the windowsill, I placed a basket full of Impatiens, which like the shade and just a bit of sun shining through.
I hope this post inspires you to look up and on the bright side of things!
Have a great weekend! xx
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Beautiful photos and lines...the form and content complement each other....
ReplyDeleteYour new home is certainly gorgeous isnt it. I love all your trees. I grew up playing in the woods and trees, so that takes me right back to being a little boy. I could get lost in them for days. Ha.
ReplyDeleteNice job on the form as well. Hope you had a good week L.
Great shots indeed. Never look back though? What if a pyscho is behind you? Buried treasure back there? never says never lol
ReplyDeleteBright pictures:)
ReplyDeleteHave a nice day!
I love the idea of looking up and not looking back. What an optimistic outlook!
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful poem! Love the pictures so full of life :D
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday :D
i have always loved canopies !
ReplyDeleteI live inside a patch of wood myself, and the canopies outside are like friends.. Wonderful fib poetry.
ReplyDeleteI haven't seen this form in awhile..I may need to try it again. The trees are magical always look up..
ReplyDeleteNicely done with the Fibonacci.. tried a couple, they're not easy!
ReplyDeletebeautiful..
ReplyDeleteYou have a lovely backyard, I am envious of the flowers & trees ~
ReplyDeleteLove the Fibonacci form and the optimism in your poem. What a lovely reminder :-) The photos are beautiful too.
ReplyDeleteSo very pretty!
ReplyDeleteYou live in a heavenly spot, Loredana........I love the message in your beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteOh this is wonderful Loredana and truly inspiring...we do tend to not look up and we miss so much...these views are amazing and you are so lucky to have them.
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful views you have there, Loredana!
ReplyDeleteWishing you a wonderful week ahead, my friend. xo.
Gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteWonderful job. I love the form of this poem, and your beautiful forest of trees.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great poetic form. I may have to try it! The forest is always an inspiration in writing.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful place, where exactly it is in NC?
ReplyDeleteHi Vandana, it's in the countryside of New York, only an hour from New York City. Much quieter and more peaceful than the city. :) Thank you!
Deletethat's a place - if i'm there i'll never look back too :)
ReplyDeletevery interesting form too
I had not heard of this type of poetry.... But I like it and your photos too.
ReplyDeleteThank you as always... your writing and your new place seems to be perfect for where you are right now.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Beautiful photos and a lovely poem! I've never heard of this style of poetry before, how neat. Hope you have been enjoying the summer!
ReplyDeleteTrees do indeed purify us just like our air.
ReplyDeleteAnd who might that be
ReplyDeletethat I remind you of?
Smiles.