Saturday, February 14, 2015

awakening



i dream of roses
in a summer garden
softly whispered
words of everlasting love
a path of fallen petals
leading the way home
i dream of you and me
hand in hand

~awakening~

hand in hand
i dream of you and me
leading the way home
a path of fallen petals
words of everlasting love
softly whispered
in a summer garden
i dream of roses


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Happy Valentine's Day!
Wishing you love each and every day! xo

31 comments:

  1. Such a wonderful palindrome..dream like :)

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  2. Lovely. I'm so looking forward to Spring! Happy Valentine's Day!

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  3. A dream that fits for the day, or any other, if only it was summer and no more snow was coming our way haha

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  4. nice...very cool mirror form...and i like the use of awakening there in the middle giving it emphasis....awakening to love....

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  5. I too admire the palindrome ~ I am dreaming of roses and summer too ~

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  6. Impressive. I really like the form...and admire the poet for writing this. It works, makes sense TOTALLY. And, sigh, I too dream of roses.

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  7. So beautiful line palindrome.. So smooth I never realized it until afterwards - bless the roses..

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  8. This is a neat palindrome poem! Beautiful photograph to set the mood.

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  9. Yes, coming and going! A dream, and I hope a reality!

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  10. I always enjoy the smell of roses in bloom during the summer. I dream of warmer days.

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  11. Oh I really loved this clever palindrome Loredana! Beautiful!

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  12. This is BEAUTIFUL. I love the reversal....so poetic!!!!!!

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  13. Great palindrome! I like the form and how the repeated words do not quite have the same meaning in the reversed order.

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  14. Lovely... lovely write, Loredana & that line/word in the middle did serve very well as bridge to those mirroring verses. Great job, poet!

    - ksm

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  15. Walking hand in hand with your beloved under falling petals. Aw.

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  16. I love the echo and contentment running softly through this piece..like a walk in the park where you get lost in the sights and sounds...

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  17. Beautiful images and romantic verse. What could be more love-ly? The calm, sure connection between characters is comfortable and comforting.

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  18. Ah, thank you, Loredana for bringing this warm with roses scent of spring/summer in your poem! Nice and dreamy palindrome x

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  19. So refreshing to awake to such a dream. Beautiful.

    Poppy

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  20. Lovely! I might have to print this up, with your name on it of course, and share it's beautiful sentiments with my husband.

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  21. Your great colorful pictures and your beautiful poem make me miss summer now! :)

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  22. Cara Loredana una bella immagine per parole molto poetiche. Vorrei non solo che l'estate fosse presto ma che fosse anche bella e non fredda e piovosa come quella 2014...Vorrei vedere i petali dei fiori a terra, spostati dolcemente dalla brezza, a disegnare i sentieri colorati nei giardini come nella tua poesìa...PRESTO! Abbraccio,Rita.

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  23. Beautiful words Loredana, as always - but I am really loving winter thus far since we're finally getting a lot of snow in KY :)

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  24. This is absolutely breathtaking..! Thanks for sharing :D appreciate your kind & warm comment.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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